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dissolve/ redemption

no reason to say we matter, no reason to say I matter. no new way in this world, now new freedom to be found. scattered souls sparkle the human runways, far away cities dazzle in magazines. sinful nights bleeds away ever so slowly to morning fog. as I awake, to find no sunrise, but everlasting beauty. upon the hills of redemption, what had god given me but hope of floating scents, of good of evil and most importantly of the wanderers. we walked this land, but you claimed to see more than what I have painted. we build this scapes together, great wanderer.
open your eyes wider and you might cross into other paintings, open your mind wider and close the chapters one by one. remain an outsider, outcast yourself, it is not this world to see your talents.
as your fingers touch, my melting soul, our lives centuries apart, suddenly flows, those rivers cut right through our dreams. maroon fascinations, addictive saffron’s, and ageless fabric, woven artificial just like the master universe. I was asked to go, where you wanted to go, as I stepped into the 6th land, under billions of stars, I encountered your destiny. I don’t want to go anymore, faith and fate, shall lie with me, as I step aside, to let the star-shine over your grave. faith and fate, in the morning fog, shall dissolve this creation once again.

Comments

Solitaire said…
I think you should write a book. It may win an award.
Keshi said…
I agree with Sol. Ghosty u should write a book mate! ur very DEEP.

Keshi.
dat's the one I call gone tan over mah head :P
Meghna said…
hello ter,
Lovely and unique blog....enjoyed reading it a lot....am so impressed that I decided to visit more often lol!
I agree with solitaire....why don u try??
*~*{Sameera}*~* said…
Wonderful deep thoughts!

The more we seek,the more we gain
The more we gain,the more complex it becomes
The more complex it becomes,the more profound the thoughts
After all,isn't this mind a traveler set out on a quest for knowledge?

"In the morning fog, shall dissolve this creation once again" - But as long as it lasted,this creation did wonders! :)
Archikins said…
brilliant!!
Kavi said…
'no reason to say we matter, no reason to say I matter. ' - Really !?!


as I step aside, to let the star-shine over your grave. faith and fate, in the morning fog, shall dissolve this creation once again.

- Brilliant !
Cinderella. said…
"The more I see the less I know,
the less I know I let it go...."

- Red Hot Chilli Peppers

Yet another wonderful creation bhai !

I loved the expression,

"maroon fascinations - addictive saffrons"

"we walked this land, but you claimed to see more than what I have painted. "

.........wow !!!!
Cinderella. said…
I'm sorry I couldnt say bye yesterday...the phone call lasted for like 2 hrs, till 11.30 I think n in between somewhere the net got dc, n I never logged in again...

Anyway chuck it. Sorry da.
See ya ol soon.
Cinderella. said…
And hey Sammy....what a wonderful intepretation girl !!!

I really appreciate it when ppl read what you write and try n apprehend it, in whatever way they can. It gives the whole thing so much more meaning.

Doesnt it bhai ?

Loved it sweety !!
Jeevan said…
Wider we go, see more other than us. Very deep in thoughts bro!
Ghost Particle said…
[sol] i will i will i will... not sure about the award part. and also my patience. :D

[keshi] Im as deep as the person who understands me luv. we are merely touching the surface...of reality.

[dreamer] hahaha bro...nah its not that weird no?

[meghna] hey! welcome here girl! i will try. I will try...:) and thanks for liking the blog. you write so well and i love ur blog designs!

[sameera] excellent expressions! :) and you understood the meaning of the post! true, it was great while it lasted. we shall never stop now, we shall never stop dancing...

[arch] hey! how have u been? Thanks da.

[kavi] sar, thanks a million! yep...there is no reason to say who matters, just that we know we are already here playing our roles.

[cindy] girl...glad that u liked it. a tribute of love this is, a tribute to passion, and a tribute to the world.

and yes, Sammy had a great interpretation of this. I agree...she made the effort, and she understood it so well. I love my readers :)

and nvm bout the chat da...connexion is bad here as well.

[jeevan] my brother, havent been to ur blog for a while...i have a really bad connection over here. will b there soon bro.

and thanks for the words, we wish to write what we wish to see that we have seen before. :)
Keshi said…
I may u'stand u but I cant write like u!

I replied to ur comment in my Marriage post. Read that :)

Also I soooo want u to ans the qns I hv in my blog today. Cos I dig ur wisdom!


Keshi.
d SINNER!!! said…
In the morning fog, shall dissolve this creation once again---loved this line...

deep thoughts there! but its always two course, no?

the farther we go, the closer we come, the farther we wanna be...
Ghost Particle said…
[keshi] hehehe that doesnt matter, understanding is.

[dsinner] you are absolutely right. its always two sides, yin and yang... hemm this merits a post in itself.
*~*{Sameera}*~* said…
Cindy and GP,thanks!

When one sees such kind of writing,can't help interpreting.Once am done with marveling at it that is :)
mute said…
on reccomendation from cinderellasays...i read ur redemption post and i must say,its worth recommending.wonderful transition of verse from wide base of freedom to self introspection..i loved it.carry on
i too blog..do visit.
Pauline said…
Waiting for the fog to lift so that star may be visible for me. such a beautiful piece "Thank you for sharing!"

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